i feel a lot like his...really beauitful, truly lovely...

That is one beautifully written poem. Absolutely loved it. I can connect to it though...sadly a lot. Loved your poem continue the great work.

Okay, that one was seriously cool. I really loved the imagery, and well as the way the sentences shorten at the end, as if you are dwindling. Very powerful piece this.

Well done.

D7

how sad i feel you

This is really good. Very powerful. :)