"and your body pressed firm and warm against mine
[iwantyouiwantyouiwantyouiwantyou]"
qualifying brilliant. I was intoxicated

there's a sense of urgency in a way, like you're running after your breath, like you are in fact, running so fast just for the feel of wind on your skin. It's lovely. The bolded phrases are a bit distracting, but I am loving the imagery, the tone, and well, everything. fab job.