 Isca 2009-05-07 . chapter 1"Sometimes you have to lose a great deal of the flesh sick
before the spirit soars well." Where in the world did this line come from? All of a sudden, I'm reading along, and then BAM, this beauty knocks me off my feet. Wow...
"And we are born anew as children." Aww, there's such life and innocence flowing through children's veins, it's glorious to be in their presence.
"Galactic arms." Nice description.
"The power of darkness and light." Beautiful. Do you believe that all things contain a bit of both?
-Isca |
 Louis Denair 2009-05-07 . chapter 1Positively mesmerizing experience. The metaphors and similes are sublime. This is technically a master-piece though some hyenas would have a different claim but theirs is the principle of bondage. They can laugh all they want in the end we will see who is laughing last. This poetic prose or whatever you deign to call it is a page or a chapter in a new, revised bible, one that holds only a few fundamental principles as not so much a dogma but a logically valid axiom from which life can freely and uninhibitedly flow. The ending though- sad, so sad, hopefully just a warning, stomach-churning potential we can all banish indefinitely. |