Lovely, how do you write so many well put togther lines wow, you have a great skill

"But too soon there comes a warning, / A lightening of the sky, / When bell-birds start their trills, / And night birds cease to fly."

I really like those lines. An enchanting poem.

a beautiful poeme, especially the lines "Where once winged creatures danced, To harps that kept apace."

=) I like the way you intergrate nature into your poems, and how they tell stories. Different from most poetry, in a good way xD
~fleur

Awesomely awesome! Excellent imagery :) I love personified trees :) Keep it up!!

Good job with the rhymings. I realy liked your imagery especially the part about the trees.

what exactly is a Fae?>

This is my favourite i think.
What do i have to do to become Fae?
Cause... i'll totally do it!

*tries really hard*

..It didn't work.. :(

LOVE THIS!
You're awesome!

The rhyme scheme and rhythm was very nice. The beginning felt a bit awkward, but soon I felt as though you had found a groove, and you went along it. I am personally a fan of the Fae and Irish Lore, so I liked how you portrayed their mirth, and gave the Fae much personality in the poem. A very nice job.