love it! this isn't going to stay a one shot is it? i can see way more come from this.

Wow, that story is really something. I absoulutly love it.

Love
KAYLA BROWN

Great story. I really liked it =)

loved it
its very ironic that aarons life ended up being the wish since he was the one who gave the gift in the first place

Oh my god! i love this story..it's really good, i am proud of u, Gupse!
u must do something with ure talent! xx

Morsal!

Simply marvelous. I don't really read one shots but this one is just, wow. First of, I love the characters. The "invisible" but beautiful girl who is always overlooked,and the guy who suddenly notices her. Also, the name Rosalia is very pretty.

Personally I didn't think it was rushed. Sometimes I think that some stories (especially one shots) have their "life-span". I don't know how to explain it, but let's put it like this: The story wouldn't be as magical if a lot of sentences added to it (just to make it longer, I mean)as opposed to having a clear and concise phrasing of things :)

And lastly, this paragraph gave me the chills. It was very beautiful: "Luck and coincidence work in mysterious ways. If one could go back in time and would even agitate a single butterfly, a whole war could be avoided or begin. Something one would never expect could occur just because a single detail changed it all. A detail, like a miscalculation by an assassin, resulting into a bullet flying into the park could change it all. Luck and coincidence work in mysterious ways indeed."

It reminds me of this quote from one of my fave movies ever, The Butterfly Effect.

Anyway, I really love this. I was speechless, actually. Good job :)

I was going to say "beautiful", but the two previous reviewers said the same thing.

Hmm...

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...how about "creative"?

Grammar-wise you have some bits to edit, but writing-wise this was AMAZING.

The part with the statue was very inspired, and I was impressed by the creativity.

Poor Aaron...little Rose is going to be a reminder of dead Rose - I mean, he'll be glad he got some part of her back, but it can't replace the girl he loved because little Rose is...well, LITTLE.

(And it's interesting irony that the gift Aaron gave Rose for her birthday ended up giving him the gift of life.)

Wow, I wrote a lot more than planned...

...great job!
- Rebekah

Beautiful. It was a little rushed, but that's okay. Great job. :]

Blessed be.

That was beautiful. A little rushing but undeniably beautiful.