Wow. You just have such a totally incredible writing style, and it really makes your characters come alive. Please update soon!

damn. so f*ckin' amazing.
continuing would make my day.

Light gravitating to the surface of water -- fucking brilliant image in my brain. A svelte element, really.

Well, I'm amused. Sara's quite the interesting character and Vanessa seems like the blundering innocent girl. Its like we're corrupting this day's youth all over again.

Woah, that's awesome, man! Hope to see more soon =D

So that means you had a threesome or an orgy o.o I envy you so much, transsexuals are hot x3
Now, back to the whole point of this review: the chapter. I liked it even though I was pretty sure they would at least kiss, no such luck for me x3 I have no idea what was going on Vanessa’s mind when she left Sara so suddenly and now I’m itching to know >.

Amen to that, drugs alone are no fun u.u
I like Sarah, she sounds like your casual dyke, not too butch, not too girly. I happen to like those x3
I hope she gets in Vanessa’s pants soon *-*

That was quite possibly the most extensive peer into a cocaine excursion that I've ever fucked over a morning reading. Quirky characters. Dunno what to think of the story yet, but I'm still reading anyway.

And, no. Never alone. Lame station.

Interesting...I like it. I can't wait for the rest to come out. Keep going it's good!

At their first introduction, you write Sara. Then you write Sarah. Which is it?

Mm, my interest is definitely piqued. Keep up the good work.