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Reviews For: Chronicles of Avairean: Tainted White
Narq 2009-07-11 . chapter 1
Oh wow, this is very very nice. You have a controlled writing style with a good variation of sentence length that keeps me well awake :P
I thougth "Tainted White" was really cool. Because when you thing if tainted it's like something's spoilt, but then you say white, and it's like it purified... so which one is it? Great, thought-provoking phrase!
Narq.
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