 Bleucrystale05 2009-10-09 . chapter 1It was still good regardless of what you say..XD
I recognized the lines that he gave Jane. that would've been cool though. *-* straight out of the book.. XD
my goshy..Jane and mister darcy..XD elizabeth was pushed out of the picture huh? XD poor mr. bingley..XD
anyway.. your one of my fave author now. you write good one shots man.. =o |
 dwpea 2009-09-12 . chapter 1I was ridiculously jealous after reading it! haha, it was lovely. you really capture the reader with your writing! |
 morphine and lollipops 2009-09-11 . chapter 1Cute. But not one of my favorites. |
 Damned to heaven 2009-09-04 . chapter 1Oh my god. That quote from P&P said by Edward Darcy was fantastic, the entire story was. Sadly british guys aren't as brilliant as Mr Darcy. Lovely story and the plot was bloody brilliant. By the way if your names 'Aria' you've got an awesome name, been in love with that name since forever lol. |
 surroundedANDalone 2009-09-02 . chapter 1This is a great idea for a one shot. Everyone has a place in their heart for Austen and you capture that with a whole new modern twist and original story wonderfully. The banter is great and your characters endearing. :) Awesome job. I'd vote for you (if the contest was still up) |
 MaPluie 2009-07-12 . chapter 1I had fun reading it. Especially in the parts where Darcy quoted my favorite lines in P&P! HAHA, sure as hell this will be in my favorites. ;) |
 playgroundunited 2009-06-08 . chapter 1i. um. love. mr. darcy. hahaha but your darcy's pretty hot stuff too. love it! |
 Sakurelle 2009-05-28 . chapter 1 Aw...this was adorable! I love it! ^^ |
 Ravina 2009-05-17 . chapter 1Great job - I really enjoyed reading this!
- Rebekah |
 katie valentine 2009-05-13 . chapter 1swet, :DD i want him too..boo .. lol. |
 Lily Llynn 2009-05-12 . chapter 1Super cute. I love all the pop culture references (except the Twilight one, but poor boy, I'd change my name too), and the integration of P&P (though a little too neatly, though I do like the couple switching, that was cute). I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (: |
 JamieBell 2009-05-12 . chapter 1This story = LOVE = My undying devotion |
 EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2009-05-11 . chapter 1Did you know that Pride & Prejudice is my favorite book of all time? Oh...you just made my day. Plus, that line about bewitching is my favorite scene from the movie. God, you have no idea. On favorites! |
 mia5081 2009-05-11 . chapter 1Well, I liked it =)) |
 Priscilla Shay 2009-05-10 . chapter 1It's cute. I like how you switched the couples...sort of...you switched the girl names. I wasn't expecting a Faith though,lol, more Charlotte
~P.S. |