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Reviews For: Revelatory Visions
Isca 2009-05-10 . chapter 1
I liked the allusion to the Sirens. "You are a river to me" is one of the best lines--it's so sacred and profound.
Louis Denair 2009-05-09 . chapter 1
oh this is blissful. dreamscape land, shackles, Siren's venomous spell and the strong ending. Love is implied but not necessarily a romantic kind. Powerful emotions, the bond and bondage are so well portrayed with such vivid phrases. The flow is so natural.
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