wow they're really head over heels with each other...XD...on the last part...i almost cried, her mother's so cruel. Even if she was that upset she shouldn't have said something so hurtful...i feel pity for Breklyn...T_T

hehehe...i got the answer to my question ASAP...cool XD LOL...why does breklyn's mom hate them to be together? I mean, they're not related, right? but it does sound weird like Breklyn thought. Still loving this story...HURRAY TO SANDERSON! (can i call you that XD)

i love this chapter...it was all about them (Darien and Breklyn). They're so cute! Totally a good pair XD...i'm loving the kiss-i mean this chapter...0_o LOL

jasmine really is nicer than i thought...anyways, what did emily mean when she said "Just like I always knew they would." ? Please answer ASAP...i'm really curious...XD

their relationship's getting more intense...on to the next chapter! loving this! XD

wah! does 'LYN' know that darien likes her...?? find out in the next chapters...hehe...love this! XD

wah! breklyn's been through a lot...be strong!! ^^ does jasmine only care for her own son?! she should make Breklyn feel comfortable...hmph!

level-up for their love! XD...at first i didn't understand the story but when i read it more it was good...on to the next chapter...!

Does he really like her? or is he just teasing her? hello to the author! XD

oh not good, poor emily!! and lyn, gosh! i really hope emily's ok! can't wait for more to see what happens with it all. also, their mum is still a **. only one daughter, geez! ~ Alenor

omg..awesome chapter!! amy is such a **..poor emily!!

OH MY GOD, I HATE HER MOM!
oh poor Emily, i hope she's okay
please update

OMG... U left me wanting 2 eread more so PLZ UPDATE SOON 8D

yay update. Poor Lyn and poor Emily. She's gonna wake up right? For a moment there I kinda expected Amy to go 'I might lose one of my kids so lets reconcile' but Em was right: their mom s a **. Such a **. I has a crowbar with her name ALL OVER IT.

i hate her mom
bleh ** her. stupid ** ! :'(

poor lyn :(