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I really liked that this wasn't a happily ever after type story. I mean I think I would have shot myself if the geek turned out to be "the awesomeest guy eva liek OMG!" But he wasn't! The whole thing was a flop and I laughed like a fool XD

I also liked the video blogging angle. It's really interesting since you're writing about an inherently visual medium.

I really enjoyed this piece. Thanks for the great read!

Nicki :P

this was so funny! it was such a joy to read from beginning to end. the title was amazing and definitley intruiged me to want to read for sure. the characters thoughts were witty and hilarious throughout. "fack" awesome. i mean that whole paragraph was great. thank you for amusing me.
*adds to favorites* who!
~fatbird:)

Ahaha that's so funny!!

Oh, too bad he was a crappy kisser! That was really funny. Of course Prince Charming isn't at Micky D's... I really liked that. Nice.

"So, I guess it sucks."

Nah-uh, it doesn't! It was a fun read and pretty unique!

- Rebekah

Hey Krabby Patty.i think you are THE MOST talented writer ever! i mean i lover you more than Stephenie Meyer! and i LOVER twilight. Watch someday you be on New York Time #1 best-selling authors.
;)

Ahahaha this was funny. A little creepy, but definitely funny. I loved it. I'm very glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:

aw, poor Jacob! :(
hahaha, that was hilarious though - i wasn't expecting that he couldn't KISS!
:D
>_<
hilarious!

-toffeecakesxox.

oh godd I tought her everything she knows hehe.
I loved this, so funny
writewritewrite
(ps. I'm the best friend she was talking about on her profile)
(pps. I think)

It certainly didn't suck at all, it was awesome and I'm kicking myself for not thinking of such an awesome concept myself, lol. Loved it ^^ I actually thought she was going for Jake, hahaha ^^ great ending ^^

Hahahah that was great/awesome/insert synonym here.

I like your style. Of writing, I mean. It'd be just the thing that the nicest guy is also a bad kisser. Sucks ;P
Good job!

Is she youtube vlogger? That was fun, you should write more! Please?

Haha! LOL!! Wow, you really have a unique style of writing to say the least. I really did like this, and I honestly expected the girl to end up with the geeky kid, but I guess not lol. Great job!

Hi. My names Kelsey and I just wanted to tell you that I adored this. its to hard to keep capitalizing on a cell phone so i wont i just want u to know that ur writing is relle good and i love it!