Oh My God! I totally feel the same way a lot. Not even funny! But now I'm mad because I'll have to show my love first lol.
There wasn't [to me] a rhyme scheme but all same it was amazing it had a real flow and I could totally identify with the feelings being presented! Nicely done!

This definitly makes you think. I know I have felt the same way sometimes. We should let our lives always reflect the love an dlongsuffering of our Lord and Savior:) Thank you for this. :)

This was definitly not what I expected from reading your summary, but that's not a bad thing. Good writing, and this is an intresting theme.