Thats awesome! I hope that it gets published it will be a great book. Good luck!!

NO!
You DID NOT delete the story while I was away! >:P

And I just started reading it yesterday but never finished >.< Anyways, what I read from it was really good. The dialogue was a little rough, I think, but maybe that's just me. I can't really say much about it since I didn't get to the good part of the plot.

Good luck on publishing it!

I loved the line where she was thinking about the cars, "Must...resist" That made me laugh.
As did the rest of Alyssa's thoughts:]

Good story. Keep it up.

As always, another awesome chapter! I love it whenever Andrew gets embarrassed and blushes. It's so cute! Haha. That Mr. Lorenzo is a bit wicked. But anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens at Andrew's house and what the papers say about the him and Alyssa.

Oh, his house you say, interesting.
JM

aw. cute!

Cute story so far

Wow, I love that he brought the house for her.
JM

update soon! who's the mystery person?

Huh? Who's the surprise? I'm confused now lol

Wow...great story. And so funny! I can't wait to read the next chapter! But Jonathon is so wrong for trying to control her life the way he is.

Wow, we found out alot about both of them, very interesting.
JM

update soon! i hate tammy. she sounds like such a bi*.

hehe...
Great story, definitely one of a kind!