It feels like you're on the verge of an exciting fantasy story here, please keep on writing, I would like to see this fleshed out!!

This truly sounds like an interesting concept and, agreeing with Melissa before me, this story is so far the most intriguing to me. Of course that could just be because anything that may challenge a widely accepted system of beliefs is like a flame to my fly. -nodnod- So, truly, you had me at ("NOTE: if this offend[s] your beliefs, I am really sorry..") But, to add more layers to that cake, your opening holds such evident promise and I'm really disappointed that the first real chapter has yet to come out! D8 Update soon because I would love to read this.

This story actually sounds the most interesting to me so far. I love stories like this so I definitely hope that you update it soon! I'd like to read more about this and the prologue is definitely full of promise. I'm going to add it to my faves list.