I really enjoyed reading that. I wish it was longer, though, simply because I wish I could keep reading it. :D

aw this was really cute =)

Cute little thing. ;)

So cute!!

Haha aw he blushed! That's cute.

"I've wanted to do that for the longest time" and he blushes! That's so cute. Dream inspired eh? That must have been some dream!! Wish my crush would walk up and kiss me like that. Damn. Story characters get all the luck!
Good story!! I liked it a lot ;)

hey...really good ..sre you possibly thinking of making some others to go along with it..anywho..cant wait for any new ones that you have coming...c ya

lol I loved it!!

Execellent, I thought this was great!

that was incredible.
you have to have more dreams and write about them!!

Hahahah, this was brilliant. =D

I loved that. I ended up cough-laughing [I'm sick] at the end of the story. It would be great if you were to extend this but whatever suits you suits me.

Now I'm off to check out what else you have. =D