Hee hee. That was a funny image-- sticking out your tongue and having someone be all like *smooch*. I laughed. They're cute. This just amused me. "I think I like you too. I even think I could grow to love you. How about dinner?"

I don't know. It was very unrealistic, but in a good way. Like Boy Meets Boy. If you haven't read that (by David Levithan) do so, because it's a great book. It's got the same sort of innocent spirit as your stories do. He's fabulous, David Levithan, I could just talk about how fabulous he is all day long. I won't, though, because I have homework to finish before tomorrow, but, you know. Anyway. If you haven't, go read absolutely everything written by him. Because he's amazing.

Anyway. Cute story!