Again, wonderful poetry, I love it so much! You've developed so much during the years from when I first started reading your work!

Unrelated but hilarious: Remember my story you reviewed called Vampire and The Romantics (I used to be known as Madeline West), did you know your review was nominated for a Boo-yah Award? I had no idea! The review was something about incest and mind-candy, haha, when I found out I was sad we didn't win but I was totally in the dark about your nomination and laughed for a very long time after reading it. Funny too, at the time I didn't think your review was strange at all!

Anyway, back to the poem in a more precise manner, I love the way this is more like a poetry slam, it's more detailed, and I like the dialogue between the characters, it fits so nicely. This whole poem is so mature and has such a deep level-I wouldn't be surprised if I saw it published! You truly have a way with words!

Jack Kerouac wrote On The Road, right? Pretty interesting poem. At least he's honest about the kind of stories he wrote to Sylvia. I liked how you formatted this.

~SirScott