Dude! I've told you this! You are amazing! I loved this!

That was beautiful! I loved the ending, and how he says "I love you" But its too late, like the girl said in her thoughts. It was really really good. One of my favs from you Sammy, even if it is depressing

this was so sad
but i absolutley loved it !
=D
keep up the amazing work !

"She still can’t see
The wood for the trees"

I liked that, because of the little rhyme, probably accidental but sounded really good!

I liked alot more, of it, but I'd have to basically copy and paste the entire poem back into this review, which, I'm not going to do. =P I'll just favourite it instead. How's that? =D

simply beautiful! yeah, i think the last lines would have worked, but it's fine the way it is. i loved it all, especially the beginning - she has a stanza, then he has a similarly written stanza with different meanings. that was really interesting to read. it's so sad and just tears at the heartstrings! really well done!