Wow. This is incredible. I'm honestly on the verge of tears here.

This, by far, is one of my favorite stories you've written thus far. :)

This is probably one of the
best stories I have ever read.
Not only did it have a good
plot and was well-written, but
it really touched my heart.
I cried about 5 times, and
I felt like I really connected
with the characters. You are
an awesome writer! :)

This was amazing... i'm at lost for words at how much i enjoyed this story your a great writer and i love your style... Keep up the writing

Aww last two chapters brought tears, Rena's admission and essay were so heartbreaking

I'm liking this story so far. Haha the skaters are amusing i love them. I like the names Rena Gina and Regina's like a mix of the two lol

It's kinda late for me here in Denmark right now and I should be going to bed, but I needed to review this before I go.. I cried here in the end, for Camille and all her family, I really liked the 'essay' too, made me cry even more.. I don't know if you have watched Twilight, but the ending sorta reminds me of the song Bella's Lullaby.. Just a thought ^.^
Hugs!

This was an amazingly good story. I don't know how you wrote the story, cuz it made me want to cry at some parts. mostly with rena and her sister and all of that. it just made me sad.

but the story was good. =]

so keep up the good writing.

I think most people (thankfully) have not gone through this much trauma. Something similiar (as in something that could bring the same sadness/hurt into play, nothing about missing people, etc, or illnesses) happened to my older brother and everyone expected me to sit and wallow in front of everyone, but to be honest, you just don't. I think the way you described Rena was really realistic and of course everything always needs a little work, but who cares. I loved this story a lot, a lot! And like how rena changed completely from friends to habits, the same happened to me. I guess in my own way it's more of relation to how I felt so it seemed real and other people might not feel the same way in a situation like that. But overall great story :)

So, after reading this, i think ill be nicer to my little sister. ;)

Hi, Im megan. Most people would hate me because i dont usually write reviews on stories i just read them. But after reading your story i just felt compelled to say something. Your a wonderful writer. I read your phone calls from a rock star, and thought it was a completely unrealistic scenario, but kept reading, because the way you wrote it. For me, it was like a guilty pleasure, like i actually took the story seriously. Whenreading this story, i expected a bunch of fluff and what not, but it was more than that. It made me cry, but not in the way where i would say to myself 'i hate that story for making me cry' but made me think about other people who've had to deal with situations like that. And yeah, it had fluff, but it had a plot that was captivating, and was wonderfully written, and i just want to say thank you, because it was a real pleasure reading your story.

Hey! I just finished reading your story and I enjoyed it so much. I laughed, I cried and it was just fantastic. Your writing is great, I dont understand why you dont have at least 900 reviews over this story. All your characters were different in their own way, and I really enjoyed Rena's journey. I loved how she finally got to express her feelings about Camille. That was great. Keep writing and great job on this!
babyk2278

A realy great story :D

i really liked this one...the essay in the last chapter made me cry it was so sweet.

This was absolutely brilliant! I loved every minute of it. I pretty much balled my eyes out the whole way through. I'm pretty much freaked out atm, just imagining what happened to poor Camille. I couldn't stop thinking about it, and I'm pretty sure I've ended up with a few more bags under my eyes from the lack of sleep I've gotten. I guess that also contributes to the fact that there was a major dust storm, that came from god knows where. You should youtube it; it's effing scary. I woke up this morning and outside my window was ORANGE. literally. okay, i'm getting side tracked. I really loved the last chapter the best, which is why I'm reviewing on this one. =D I wasnted to point out that in the first couple of chapters "Kiara" is spelt as "Tiara" and I was like o.O typo or is her name really Tiara. (What is the world coming to? I feel bad for the girl. "Hey my name is Tiara, Nice to meet you,") But other than that and my pointless rambling of me not getting sleep and such, this is definately another excellent story you have written that has kept me awake til dawn. I love your stories- they make me laugh out loud on the bus, at school, even at home. I'm pretty sure everyone has seen me cry whilst stooping over this laptop of mine, and i think that you have made my bored life so much better between homework, assignments and school nights. I'll let you go and i'll shut up now XD
all my love,
Vickiie k3

Man... You know, I couldn't even properly read the last few chapters through tears.
This story is... Breathtaking.
Even the simplest chapters kept me on my toes and the intensity of them just grew and grew and, hell, I was afraid that you'd bail on it in the end - because I had no idea how you'd deal with summoning so much of it - but it was breathtaking. You rounded it up sweetly, brilliantly.

I can honestly say I loved this. So much.

Every character. From Rena to Gina, Jared, Fin, Isaiah and Shane, Damon, hell, everyone. Well, I have my reservations regarding her father, but I guess we all do.

I'm speechless. (well, except for what I've already written, haha). I don't know what more to say.

Thank you for sharing.

Enjoy~