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A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-11-18 . chapter 1
aw how cute now if u excuse me i have to go to buy some chocolate
Arvael 2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Haha, I really enjoyed it. I have orange (juice) senses and if it's about orange juice I can totally act like this! No, not really, on if I'm high on orange juice or have withdrawal effects... xD
Anyway, this was a really great short story!^^
= ) Lexi 2009-07-07 . chapter 1
okay, just kidding. loved the story but i dont think ill demand chocolate from a stranger. . . unless derricks there to save me = )
= ) Lexi 2009-07-07 . chapter 1
im loving all of your stories. . . looks like im gonna have to go to the library and freak some hot guy out and then demand chocolate. . .
Kimera77 2009-06-04 . chapter 1
Oh my God! For a hardcore-give-me-chocolate-or-give-me-dead-fan like myself, this story was... inspirational! Divine! What I wouldn't do for a chocolate-sense?! ;)

Really good story. Funny, memorable and simply cute. Great job. Keep it up!
Im Just Mlssundaztood 2009-05-31 . chapter 1
chocolate.

God, I've done something like that before. 'Cept I don't have her cool chocolate senses. I saw a guy opening his cholocalte bar that was this crunchy/carmely kind and I had just had to ask him for some. We ended up dating for six months too and it didn't end bad.

so cool story.

But you just got to write another oneshot on her meeting the friends, seriously you do...

-PLKAF
Kayleigha 2009-05-26 . chapter 1
That was fluffy and love-a-lay! :-)

Kayleigha
AdiGal 2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Haha, that was really, really entertaining and cute! *Would you be scared if I said yes?” He asked. I contemplated it.* Man, Lyssa was SO amusing!
We just can't get enough of chocolate, can we?! I'm off to got eat a bar of my own. It was a great one-shot.
-AG :)
paraNormal 2009-05-18 . chapter 1
interesting fact i learned in bio today: chocolate gives you more pleasure than kissing. who knew? [besides you ;)]

anyways... very cute, though, the beginning was better than the end.
HelloLovely 2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Cute. :]
jenjen-0 2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Awesomeness. Loved it. Wouldn't that be really amazing if that actually happened. I shall now aimlessly wander the streets looking for hot guys to feed me. Oh, wait, I do that anyway.
toffeecakesxox. 2009-05-12 . chapter 1
hahahhaa, i love you! i love this!
i love chocolate!
and Lyssa, and Derrick (hot name, btw!)
*favs*
so adorable!

-Kristy.
Hazelnut Romance 2009-05-12 . chapter 1
nice one shot. good job!
I Murder on Impulse 2009-05-11 . chapter 1
LOL so cute!

xx
NoieD 2009-05-11 . chapter 1
Very fun new one-shot!! Thanks for posting.
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