really cute story. So, answers to questions.
1. I sort of like Bonner better. More original.
2. I have screamed at people while working at a theme park. It made my day. :)
3. I hope Ben and Tyler end up together, currently I am more of a Ben then Bonner fan. But I guess there will become a love triangle, just cause they are awesome.

haha i like it, cant wait till the rest...

O Benny boy. But she didn't almost cry when Ben left, so Idk how Ben's going to compare to Drew. =(

I think I'm Team Drew =D

1. Love the name Drew better, but I think it fits as her nickname for him and Bonner fits for everyone else.
He's freaking sweet too =DD

2. No similar stories. But if she had been kicked out that would've been stupid in my opinion.

3. I'm guessing that Drew will be the one looking for her and Ben will fit in and they might date a bit, but if Drew comes back sooner than later, Tyler will pick Drew.

But if Ben and her date for a little while then there will be a lot more conflict between ben/ty/drew.

LOL hope thats not TOO confusing...


4. Good chap.

I'm confused, did she just graduate or is she going into her senior year?

1. yes i most certainly like him better but he really does seem too perfect. i like the name drew better. bonner goes to either boner or bonnet in my head so ya..
2. haha the suessland stunt was amazing had me laughing so hard. oh and its totally true how people have authority in certain domains but outside of that can't stand up for themselves.
3. i think that ben saw them kissing or the lady who took their picture definitely got the kiss oh and definite confusion in loveland for ty.
4. only comment "oh holy little debbie snacks" love it!

I'm starting to like Bonner more. Their relationship seems sweeter and more genuine in feelings than the one with Ben and Tyler. At first I shipping for the latter one, but I think I've changed my mind. Ah, but it still feels like she's unintentionally being a player, even though I understand she thinks it'll only last for a moment and then it's gone. Bonner's name...I absolutely love it.

It's really nice hearing that the Suessland stunt is actually true. I can't think of anything similar that happened to me.

I'm guessing that once Bonner finds out that Tyler had been kissing Ben the other day, he'd think she'd shamelessly do anything to have a bit of fame in her life and get to boast about it later to her friends. Hurt feelings and possible fights up ahead, once they meet again and spend some time together.

Just some grammar stuff that stood out.
"Oh why didn’t--"-->"Oh, why didn’t"
“Hey Sam.”-->"Hey, Sam."
“Okay he’ll be there soon--"-->“Okay, he’ll be there soon--"

This story is amazing! Wow. lol, I love Drew, he is a character out of dream! But, yeah I like Drew better than Bonner, it just makes it seem more, I don't know him, you know? I was laughing so much at the Suessland stunt. I mean, how could someone almost get kicked out of Suessland? lol, anyways, I'm thinking a whole conflict is going to arise between Ben and Drew over Ty. I mean, who is she going to choose? Ben or Drew? Seriously, though, I do not know who I would pick. I love both of them, and I'm thinking she's probably going to be having a hard time choosing too, lol. But, anyways, love the story! Keep the chapters coming please, they are fantastic!

XoXo ness

1. The Bonner to Drew switch was a bit confusing. I had to re-read it for it to click. The name isn't bad.

2. No, I haven't gotten in trouble like that.

3. I don't know, but there's something about Drew that makes me uneasy. I just don't buy him.

4.'Feeling Weightless' is that a nod to All Time Low?

Red bra-white shirt combo? That's just trashy. Like 'Georgia redneck trailer park trash' trashy.

That has to one of the worst pickup lines I've heard of. 'Wanna be my dungeon master?'

That is so wrong. 'Double since it's a magical place.' 'Triple since it's your first tooth.' That is just so wrong.

Fourty bucks for a tooth!! I got a couple quarters at most! What a ripoff...

I don't think Tyler crushed Bonner's 'lap'. It's located in that region though.

I knew it! I knew Exicted State was gonna be a bunch of egotistical brats.

Holy Fall Out Boy? Or something else?

Why is a Canada theme so scary? It's Canada for God's sake.

Are we going to learn about this bad Christmas at any point?

Oh, I had that same exprience like Ty on Dudley Do-Right once or twice. It was a roller coaster though. We went up the huge 'hill' and it kinda of stays there for a second before going over. So you start screaming and just when you figure it out and run out of breath you go down all the way.

"Do I look like I'm allergic to carbs?" I think I'd die from withdrawl of carbs or get extremely crabby.

Teddy Gier? Is it Teddy Gieger, by chance?

See a smart person wouldn't sell the info to the paparazzi. You sell it to rabid fans that would cut off their limbs off for that kind of info.

"just standing there...breathing..." Well, I would hope that she was breathing.

What is so great about Juno? I thought it was stupid.

Now I must clean the kitty litter. (insert sarcastic yay here)

1. New opionions of Drew/Bonner? Like the name?
i lovelovelove the nickname bonner! i think it's brilliant haha.

2. What did you think of the Suessland stunt? any similar stories?
haha i thought it was funny - it sounds like something i would do. that's funny that it actually happened to you. sadly, i don't have any similar stories. one day lol.

3. Guesses for the future?
three words. bonner and ty! i love them together

i love this story i absolutely loved Drew, the name the character. i just love him! please update soon!

Hiya!

First of all, I'm sorry, but I never did manage to review Chapter 3, because I've been busy lately (flew across the country alone for the first time, babysitting, etc.) and have been way behind on my own writing and have been preparing for (horror of horrors) ACT testing, so I'm afraid it rather slipped my mind. Sorry! But no worries, I'm not at all upset. PLUS, I got a whole chapter dedicated to me! :D

These two chapters... well, quite frankly, they've been amazing. I love love love your writing style, especially the bits like "My whole body felt like I had just jumped off the high dive in the pool, that weightless feeling and the thrill that you know you’re not connected to the ground and for that split micro second you know nothing, not even gravity has a hold of you," and "it was all just a blur or magnificent color and then water, lots of water"

These sorts of descriptions really draw me in, put me in Ty's place, let me see and hear and feel and believe. Spectacularly done. :)

The only complaint I had was the line "Michael and Jeff looked stunned, “that manipulative piece of bubblegum!”" and even then, I'm not sure if it's really a complaint or just an observation. I love Audrey and Ty's bizarre expletives; they add an extra facet to their characters, a unique quirk to signal to us and endear them to us. It's like an inside joke. When you let Michael and Jeff in on it, have them do the same thing, it seems almost stolen. Flat. Worthless. Overdone. I suppose, it's possible that it works by creating a parallel between the two groups, proving that they are compatible, but if so, it seems rather forced. Not least because I, personally, have never heard people above the age of four use such zany, innocent, random words like they do.

Anyway, like I said, that's the only thing that bothered me; the rest of it was just amazing. Usually, romance in general sends me running for the hills, let alone a romance where the girl is caught between two "perfect" guys, but this is good. Fun to read. Intriguing. And EXTREMELY well written.

I love the depth to the characters; I constantly feel like I'm only seeing the tip of the ice berg. I can tell that most, if not all, of these characters have well-developed, fleshed-out personalities that you are casually, naturally revealing.

For example, Ty's thought: "I nodded in response, just knowing her for five minutes I could tell she was to unique to be a Lindsey," made me both wince and smile, because it's both ridiculous and totally believable. Of course, having a common name doesn't mean a common personality, which Ty should know since "Audrey" is a perfectly normal name for an exuberant, unforgettable girl. But at the same time, it's really something that Ty WOULD think, on some level, because of the originality and meaning of her own name and the nature of her personality and thought-process.

I really do like Bonner. He's passionate but conscientious, daring but cautious, buoyant but real, callous on the surface but gentle just a little lower. You want to hate him for messing things up with Tyler and Ben, but then you start to fall in love with him, too. I'm actually as torn as Ty (or was she will be...), as opposed to Twilight, where I felt Stephanie Meyer was just stringing us along for the ride.

I especially liked the lusty/lovey difference between the two different outings, because I was a little nervous that the two guys would end up being the same (humble, afraid to be hurt, sensitive, etc.), or that the one relationship would be more real than the other or something. I don't know, but I liked the way you did it.

Um... yeah, I guess that's it. Great job, and have fun writing!

~Raynne~

dont stop posting!! i really like this story and think its a brilliant idea. plus there are so many cool characters and i could see this story becoming very popular just keep going with it.
anyway i must say i would love to be kissed while on the Tower of Terror because thats one of my favorite universal rides (love amusement parks) so i hope they got that unblurred pic lol
oh and i think i like lindsey the best so far although i think something needs to happen so she gets a cool nickname. anywhoo can't wait til the next update

since i enjoy this, i'm hoping my constant reviews will pressure you to write some more!

1. i mean.. the thing is, my bestfriend would never do that to me. you know? she would totally make sure i got the guy, but she would never ditch me like that for her own selfish reasons. so i makes me really double guess audrey. as far as tyler's lack of backbone for the situation, it makes me a bit angry. but hopefully you have some further thought for that and will help ty grow.

2. i like anna. maybe because she's the only girl who is their age and chills with 'em. if you think about it.. if a girl hangs out with a bunch of guys, chances are she's totally kickass. ex: donna (okay, well jackie sucked at first but you know) from that 70's show.. okay i can't think of anymore but still ! i know she basically HAS to only hangout with them, but it'll mold her to be kickass... god, i like words too much

3. um.. can i be honest? seems a bit corny. like the whole fireworks and blah blah. i mean, i loved it. i jumped in excitment as i skipped every other words looking for "lock" "lips" "kiss" "makeoutsession" but you know, i was deep down in the pit of my heart wishing for something a little different.. like maybe something even tiny and simple where she trips and bam lips. ugh, nevermind. thats corny.. but i would have loved something like she's the man.. gutta (?) cheese is my favorite ! you know, you're original with the whole barney (loved it) thing and all of that brilliant (non)sense but i wish the kiss would've been something funny. i guess thats what i'm trying to say. thank god i'm not rambiling or anything.

4. comments! well i'm sorry for the amount of words you're gonna have to read.. i mean if i was a brilliant review i could see how that could be fun but i just like to ramble a lot and make myself seem funny and smart! anywho.. you're doing awesome. origianlity is awesome and even if i can't spell you know what i'm saying. can't wait for the next chapter ! write soon, please.

5. ty + ben =

1) I think she should've told her what she was thinking. Audrey was being kinda selfish. But I bet Ty and Sam had alot more fun than Audrey...

2) Haha I like them. Lindsey because she's cute ;) and has cool hair

3) I don't know if he should've kissed her, but it was very cute and Ty obviously had no objections ;)

4) Good chapter! =)

5) No idea as of right now, unless the guy from Excited is the one looking for her, because it just seems like Ben and Ty are pretty close.

1. Uh...

2.I do belive that I like Jeff. Jeff's that dorky funny boy, the one that cracks the jokes and breaks the tension. Always a keeper.

3. I did like the fireworks and Ben. I think if you added more detail about the fireworks it would have made that part just a little more special.

4. "I feel like I'm in Barney's stomach." That's an interesting visual.

I loved Dozer's rambling. It is quite cute and amusing.

Excited State has to have red everything? I smell arrogance and egos.

Smore's Poptarts but Strawberry Toaster Strudel.

Oh man the Tower of Terror...That was awesome. We rode it like three or four times and I think on the last two times I opened my eyes. All the way to the top and all the way down to the bottom. The view was amazing though.

I do believe that the "American" kiss has turned into the shove your tongue down the other person's throat.

5. I caught that their hands didn't fit perfectly. A possible love switch.

As much as I love The Cab and Alex Marshall (sigh), I love All Time Low, Alex Gaskarth and Zack Merrick (big sigh) more.

Pansy Boy Cat is getting less Pansy-ish and more pervert-y. He's watches me change.

Dozer, but mostly because I love the nickname and I don't like tight pants on a guy. ;)

2. I didn't get the taxi but...Cobra Starship, Forever the Sickest Kids. Is the taxi one, The Cab?

3. Hmm. A love triangle?

4. Haha I've never seen someone lick a pick and put it on somone. But at Breaking Benjamin, the lead singers pick flew out of his hand(I think) and landed in this sweaty guys head and he didn't even realise =)

Great chapter! I love the addition of the lead singer into the mix.