"Let's let Nature's beauty arise like fireflies." BEAUTIFUL. :D

"But maybe he DOES care if Charlie asks you to the prom.." Brilliant. I loved this line so much.

LOL! The parentheses part was hilarious. You just had to throw in a little '403 Forbidden' rant, didn't you? :P

Now I'm thinking about 'the string theory' for some reason (great :P).

oh damn, it's so unnerving that I don't know a miniscule fraction about quantum physics. it's utterly fantastic an eye-opener I hear but who's got the time? After all- there's 'university education'. Gotta love your subtle hint hints at certain delicate issues round fictionpress. AND I learned a good few completely new words. anyhow, I like how you merge philosophical/scientific theory with a romantic plot and the flow is sublime in a way