You are a great pessimist, so great it seems optimistic. Weird, yeah but thats me. I love your work.

Very intriguing and refreshing read! I have to agree, I too love the internal rhythem of this. It makes me think a little of Albert Camus "The Stranger" a bit in terms of that raw emotion that keeps this poem turning upside down with every word. You absolutely master words and poetry. Brilliant work. I hope others recognize the profound impact of this poem. Keep writing, k.