first of all I want to say that was mean tricking us into thinking there was a new chapter T_T

and second of all I wanted to say thatI think your story is freakin amazing. It's the best story I've read here (and probably anywhere for that matter) that wasn't done by a pro writer. I love your story and hope you update soon... please?

oh and please have more aw moments between sky and shahar / netta and Rhys...but mostly sky and shahar (they're so cute together, they're my two favorite characters)

Aw, I actually thought this was a new chappie -_- Update! Update! Update! Please? And the story is not crappy at all! And extras would be cool too ^_^

I love your story. My favourite Character is Skyla because I can relate to her sometimes. Keep writing, forever! I don't think I'll ever get bored reading this.
Minty

This is an AMAZING story. I just got on this site and I already found something like this! I am reading with a fuvor, and if you are REALLY planning on making this a manga, I would be more than willing to draw it for you. (If you can't do it yourself, that is). It would be an amazing manga, with your amazing characters and plot...anything I can't draw, a friend of mine can help me with it (such as the horse that they Shahar and Shyla ride before it runs away. horses are hard. XD) All you'd need to do is give me really detailed descriptions of the characters or colored sketches of them and I'd DO it. 83

o_O Wow you write these stories fast! Anyway, awesome story, awesome chaptors. Hah, but it gets a bit confusing about the whole King Dandre, Queen Palesea, and the Dovo-something dude that got locked up. They were siblings or something? And I wonder if Chi and Erebus is baddies or just following instructions. IS Dovo-something bad? I can see how he cares for his people, but to start war? At first, when I read the story, I thought it Skyla was about 15, not 20! XD What else? I love the name Chi. It's short and cute. So I guess I'll just stop boring you now and say UPDATE!

hey i love your story its great u should try to publish it i know i'd buy it!

YES!! FINALLY! GOOD JOB SKYLA!!

and i dont want her to leave... ;_; and neither does sharhar! XD

but that was great in the beginning [in a way, i guess...] when rys and sharhar went slightly-kinda-in a way aginst the angel troopy people. [oh god that made no sense]

but im glad u finally updated. ^^

and i love ferrets! :D its an albino ferret!! :D awesome!!
that was funny when they decided the name for her. XD rys and skyla are always so funny.

i cant wait for the next chapter~ [this review was soo much more shorter than my last ones!! D: WAT IS WRONG WITH ME?!?!]
-Em

aaw... that was an awesome way to end a chapter~~

but!
that prophecy mentioned skyla!! it did it did it did!! :D but it might not end well... :( UWAAH! IM SO WORRIED! -spazzes-

i just hope everything comes out ok.
like... in the end.

...

but i like how skyla and sharhar's relationship is progressing. ^^ this is good so far~~! X3 anywho. that was mean wat that guy did with the flower! he made it explode on them! D: cruel. but i mean, he'd have even more of a reason to if he actaually knew who skyla was. not like it's a good thing tho! she's a good person, but since he was obviously from witchery, and she's ya kno a princess of the rival country... he wouldn't be to happy if he knew. thats all im saying.

hm... wat else?
haha nalo's gunna be a real womanizer some day, i can tell... too mcuh time with rhys, neh? but it's ok. the fatherly relationship between them is really nice. it warms the heart doesnt it! ;D

i think that chaya was somehow erlated to the witery leaders before the war. i dont kno how, but i jus thave this feeling... but i mean, i cant be sure... it's just a whim...

so, ya...
...
:D
update when chris gets back from camp! -yes i do read the author's notes! XD-
-Em

STELLA! stella?! no way!! stella!! -sorry, its my moms nick name which is kinda creepy...-

but wat does the name have to do with their past?

that memorial was sad! D': what does all of the constellations mean, besides the fact that the stars are a big part of witchen tradition?

and i thought that was funny: “Don’t you bare those pointy little teeth at me!”

XD

amazing.

cant wait for next chapter. thi story is soo cool. ^^ keep it up! ^.^
-Em

pff-- n-nalo--d-dat'snot a-pfft--g-good thing-tot- say--AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!! OMG THATS HILARIOUS!
X'P i cant keep a straight face... -hiccups because she's laughing to hard-
oh... what are we going to do with you, nalo...? XD

oh my fricken kira... -sighs, shaking head-

ok... moving on...

now...

yayz! skyla's learning witchan! X3 now after some time she'll becable to understand people! X3

but waht is chaya talking about in the middle of th chapter, like 'all spells wear off'? and then this thing with rhys about the girl-- how he fell for her right when he moved here -at ten- but he thinks it was when he was 16? whats up with that??
and was anything done to sharhar similar to rhys? -worry, worry-

and im still worried about skyla. she IS a runaway princess... wouldnt someone look for her, or am i just overreacting (like usual)?
...

well... im gonna read the next chapter! it has a strange title! XD

-Em

aw... i liked the last part...

...
now!
the title has been some what explained; a golden love is a flower; a rare flower-- so what doe sit have to do with the story...? -evil smile-

and the wedding was so cool, i wish weddings were actually like that! XD

and rhys has some vampire in him... does that mean sharhar deos to, or maybe it is just a fluke... hm...

and sharhar is starting to like skyla. YES. finally.
and Nalo is still the CUTEST thing EVER! it was so adorable when he was scared of rhys' girlfriends. hehe. perfect. ^^

anywayz, cant wait for the next chapter! i relly like this story!
-e/r~

Wow. I really feel sorry for Nalo. What kind of a mother does that to her son? Keep up the good writing! I love the story so far!

AW~! XD i luv nalo~! and rhys! sure he can be perverted; but that... that is wat i call simply AMAZING!

freakinaye im gunna cry! i cant wait to see how nalo starts to grow up and how he could get more comfortable being with them and stuff...

:)

oh, ya... and wat was with rhys when he was angry...? is that normal, or is something wrong, or... is it something completely different...?

hm...

i just cant wait for the next cahpter! i luv this sotry; your a really good writer! X)

“Oh, so that’s where you get it from…”

“Wh-HEY!”

XD i luved that!
Oh! yippie of updates~! x3

really liked the chapter... im curious about the crest on the cloth and why 'someone really wanted it gone'...

well, i guess i'll haev to read the next cahpter! since ya put up two~!

heehee, i like this story! :D

i think shahar is cool, and i cant wait for rhys to get better! X3
skyla is also very cool~!

cant wait for the sixth chapter, this is a really interesting story... hm...

i wonder if the king dude will go after skyla? or maybe...
hm... -continues pondering for awhile- and that dark magic shahar pulled before my come back to haunt him, too! :O

gah! hurry, i've already started brainstorming! argh!