UPDATE.

interesting :D

let me guess he ends up with her but the satan's daughter chick tries to seperate em. but she doesn't succeed.

n the antisocial chick melody and him dont get along but in the end they fall in love.

blah cant wait 4 more

hey! this seems like its going to be a really interesting story so far! The summary drew me in and after that first chapter i cant wait for the next one! i love love love ur writing skillz and ur style! keep it up! and of course update soon pleez! :D

Interesting onept here keep it up

:( This was sad. But really really good. you got the message across very well in such a short space, which i like :)

but suggestions:
maybe add more detail, like more of the setting and stuff, maybe more about the other kids.

all in all very nice work :)

update?

x lauren