like the story so far. i think it's good how you are so descriptive. just a question: is there going to be romance anytime soon? i'm not trying to hurry u, i just always love a good romance story with adventure in it. keep writing plz!

Hey, that was a pretty good beginning. You have a way of writing that really appeals to the reader and made it compelling. And the ending was so sudden, but in a good way, it made you want to read more! Good job so far!

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Interesting beginning. I like the way you've written this, and I though it was a pretty good opening. And the concept of singing is also very unique, good job!