It's over! :'( great story, great story :) So, like, I have a question... sabrina is 5'4, and considered short? I think she's average height though, I;m 5'4.5 and considered pretty tall, (in my head) Oh well, it's different, anyways. it is a good rewrite, and ends wuite differently from the other one, since Tyler never had his happy ending... How sad, hopefully he'll get one in LIADC, keep writing!
- Christina

hahaha, that ramble made me laugh, well, anyways this was sorta a filler chapter, since not much happened, but it was a good one :)
- Christina

Is Ed the guy that Maddie ends up marrying, or does he have a different role in the rewrite? It's good that Sabrina forgave maddie, but the reason in the original is somewhat better, because Maddie doesn't actually do anything for Sabrina to forgive her, you know? But it's all good this way as well :) Hope you can update soon!
- Christina

Hey! So this was a pretty god chapter, but I noticed two mistakes

“That he was sorry. I don’t care though. All I care about now is finding a way to not move to Scotland. Do you know how bored I’ll be?!” I wailed, ok I’ll admit it I sounded like a spoilt child but I didn’t carer!

Spoilt should be spoiled, and carer shouldnt have the extra r at the end. Just thought I'd point that out in case you would want to fix it :)

- Christina

Hey! I'm back! (changed my pen name, used to be Christina tqct) SUPER SORRY for not reviewing or reading lately, really busy :( But I'm back, and I hope you forgive me :) (I'll review every single chapter to make up for missing out for the last month) Keep writing!
- Christina

Ooh I liked the way we could read about Sabrina's dreams.
And I'm glad Maddie and Sabrina are friends again.
Are they gonna stay friends orr or is Maddie gonna meat Ed and fall in lurve with him and cos of that Sabrina hates her hah that's what I think, I wanna know what happens. But don't tell me, I like guessing when I read the story lol.

I think the chapter is pretty good :)
The way Maddie explained everything was written well.

Good chapter.
I can't wait to see how the story unfolds about Ed now aha.
Hm I don't know what to make of Tyler, one moment he seems nice the other... he doesn't lol.

Is this the Ed that Maddie ends up with?
Noo don't tell me you've completely changed that bit. Ahah.

I love this chapter, it's great.
It's quite funny, and written well :)

wow what a great story plz keep updating I cnt wait to read on its so addicting!

Nice chapter :)
Just a few things... In the first line it says 'The morning after my argument with I knew something was wrong'... with who?... Is there meant to be a name there? And then a few spelling mistakes and some grammatical errors e.g. form (instead of from)and doctor inform (no 's'). Sorry for pointing these out, I can't stand spelling mistakes lol. You probably don't want me nagging about this though, so I'll stop now...
Sabrina moving to Scotland was a surprise. I don't remember this in the first story so it's a good change (if it is a change lol). I didn't think Diana would actually make her go through with it. And Tyler's email... He seems like a different person in different chapters which I like. It shows how he usually is, and then how he feels about Sabrina. It seems as if the Sabrina Tyler and the normal Tyler are two different people.
When Sabrina had to say goodbye to her friends it was pretty sad. I think my favourite sentence in the whole of the chapter is 'I read the words and started to cry, small and rather pitiable tears all because of the words Tyler had so obviously put his heart into writing.' I think it descibes well about how Sabrina finally realises how much Tyler likes her :D

hey! nice chapter, I love all the sarcasm at the end. Update soon!
-christina

ah, weird, this chapter didn't show up in my email account, the next one did, and I was like, this oesn't make any sense, then I went back and was like oh. Awesomeneess chapter, I have a question for you, are you re writing life in a different colour too? Update soon = internet cupcakes!
-christina

ooh the drama increases lol. I liked Harriet's account of finding Maddie, good descriptions in there.
Great chapter.