I really loved all the literary references in this poem. It took your sense of longing and made it even more relatable to the reader.

However, I found the tone of the poem to be quite naive. I'm not a believer in perfect endings and fairy tales so the sense of "unfairness" is not one that I agree with.

But overall, I liked this poem. Well written! Great work and keep it up!

Very sweet! I can really relate to it alot, which makes me like it even more!

I love the Shakespeare/Disney reference, that kinda stuff makes me really envision the poem.

I can relate I've been going through those same feelings lately.

SpottedStar :)

Wow. I haven't checked back on your profile for awhile. I'm glad I read this poem. :)

And I like this poem a lot because I can definitely relate to it.

My favorite line: "Even Belle had her beast." Haha.

There's just so much longing and wishing and yearning in this poem. Great work. I hope you get your prince :)

aww..this is sweet 3

it seems to be the reverse of my poem "fairytales" as well :D

Oh i hear ya on this one! great work! and i know EXACTLY what you mean!