ohohoh.
you have my heart with this.
into spoken word? or maybe i've been listening to too much of it lately, but this, it has undeniable flow.

! WOW. So I'm like, basically reviewing all of your stuff because I was so impressed with your "just in" poems. And wow, once again, I love this one so much! The chanting of "murder" is such a great example of dramatic effect. I loved it! Keep writing!