|Reviews for The Beach|
| bvwpeanut 8/20/09 . chapter 1
This poem had such a peaceful tone! It reminded me of when I was at the beach a few weeks ago! Very nice!
| Scarlett Water Immortal 8/3/09 . chapter 1
That makes me want to be at th beach. Wah!
P.S. beware of evil screensavers with eyes their everywhere!
| kyox88 7/29/09 . chapter 1
this poem give me the sense of smooth and calmreallybut i think it would add up more feelings if you make a few lines shorter, just bring it down
| GoldieHotcakes 7/24/09 . chapter 1
I loved this because it made me really feel like I was at the beach. Great imagery. And my favorite line is the one that seems to sort of have a theme: "Then while I walk I hear how peaceful and quiet it is like the worlds shut up for one second"
| Cadie Rose 6/4/09 . chapter 1
| Aomera 6/4/09 . chapter 1
m nice gentle piece, great use of the senses. Think you've got a typo in the second line - meant to be shivers?
LOVE your picture btw (the rainbow pencils) I may have stolen it to save on my computer!