This poem had such a peaceful tone! It reminded me of when I was at the beach a few weeks ago! Very nice!

That makes me want to be at th beach. Wah!

P.S. beware of evil screensavers with eyes their everywhere!

this poem give me the sense of smooth and calmreallybut i think it would add up more feelings if you make a few lines shorter, just bring it down

I loved this because it made me really feel like I was at the beach. Great imagery. And my favorite line is the one that seems to sort of have a theme: "Then while I walk I hear how peaceful and quiet it is like the worlds shut up for one second"

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Very descriptive

m nice gentle piece, great use of the senses. Think you've got a typo in the second line - meant to be shivers?

LOVE your picture btw (the rainbow pencils) I may have stolen it to save on my computer!