Oh wow. Interesting development here. This should get sticky, real soon, hee.

Wow, everything that happened in this chapter took what I was expecting to happen and turned it on its head. :D That's of course, a good thing because it keeps things exciting.

Looking forward to what's going to happen next.

This story is so great...i was captivated by it...i can not wait for an update soon...please please please update soon...i loved yourstory...very well written...i can not get enough of it...:D:)

You misspelled "fridge".. with frig, which means to have sex, or masturbate, apparently. Other little mistakes were found but I didn't bother, since they were little.
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New installment, joy. Oh but the plot is getting better, moving fast but still good I guess.

um.. the main characters are Devin and Ryan right? Like Devin+Ryan=

thank you so much for the update, I absolutely love your stories

I sense a very complicated relationship coming up...This may need a diagram...>: D how exciting.

I enjoyed the update

GAH!

Another great chapter, Hero!
Wow, the plot just got even more twisted. You have a true talent for doing that, you know? Drama! Of course, people love drama, when it's done right. And you always do it perfectly each and every time! I couldn't spot too many mistakes, actually. Though, a one point it was hard to tell who was doing what. Hm...The fav character list changed now!

1.Ryan (God, he's just freaking awesome)
2.Devin (He's finally stepping up!)
3.Shelby (I always love the little sidekick characters, they don't get enough love. Plus, he reminds me of Mark from your Demon story)
4.Tommy (without him, would there be a story?)
5.Skylar (We were just kind of introduced to him, but I'm sure he'll go up the scale soon)

=D

Keep writing and updating! I love all your stories! They make me happy. ^_^

Okay, I love this story, so much it's crazy. And you see, I need some updates, as in constantly! It's just a great story.

Weird premise, but I guess intriguing in it's own way. M, hopefully there'll be a few more plot twists to come. I kinda feel bad for Tommy. I hope he ends up redeeming himself.

this is pretty cool story! i hope you update soon! =]

I...Freaking...LOVE IT!

It just about killed me when Devin basically said he wanted to be Ryan's 'Knight in Shinning Armor'...hilarious.

For some strange reason, my second favorite character is Shelby...O.o...(Ryan being #1) I'd like to learn more about him! ^^'

Great chapter, as always!
Please update as soon as you can!

(I LOVE THIS STORY!..I LIKE TO USE CAPS LOCK AND EXCLAMATIONPOINTS!)

The PLOT, It THICKENS!! xD

I just love your stories!

please update sooN!

well, if its going to be short, its good that things are being revealed faster than normal :)
you are now going on alert because i need something like this to read
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ong! i used to watch Mars!

...love the story too, so far :)

Not a stereotypical high school fic, good. Normally when I read anything that has to do with high school it’s usually about the goth & jock relationship. I appreciate that this story is a little different.
The plot’s moving fast, it’s the second chapter and you can already tell Devin is smitten with Ryan… didn’t he hate him not to long ago.
Tommy< Ryan >Devin = I couldn’t resist :P

Ps. saw some grammar mistakes but I forgot where they were… oops!