Oh my, the beginning is very intense, with the 'procreating innards' part. That's a good thing, though, as you immediately draw the reader in. :)

The line, "Through a whimper, you were born," connectes perfectly to the word, "VICTIM." Nice! :D

Ooh, dark. I like the line about it "sitting thick under my tongue," and then the thought of the ideas being etched into wedding vows or research papers or bed time stories. That's nice. Keep writing! :)