This was great and I love the characterization. I swear, a pathological liar? Kickass.

I really hope you update this. Gosh it's getting so good.

OH MY GOD CHUCK'S THE KILLER ISN'T HE?! I freaking love this story it's hysterical and makes me wonder who the killer is. I love it! I can't wait for the romance to start playing in! I love this and I wish I could articulate better how wonderful it is! XD

This is a brilliant concept.

AH

Oh I really like this story. It's really fun to read about someone who /can't/ tell the truth for some reason, and I really like Chuck. I can't wait to read more

This idea is freaking amazing! Honestly, the 95 reviews, you people deserved every single one of them, unless they're like, flames or something, which I doubt.
Anyways, this is hilarious. Poor Devyn... He must get into trouble practically every other minute or something...

I really love it, it's amazing and I hope you update soon! It's really great :) I love Devyn's character and the things he says are hilarious, even if they are lies and the translations are funny too. He's a really awesome character.

My god, authors.
I think I'm addicted!
Nice work you two.
And I laughed so much.
I'll be stalking around for an update!!

I feel bad for Dev. Now I'm a little bit more curious about this cop/detective that he 'likes.'

I just love this story! I haven't ever had as much sympathy for a literature character as I have for Dev. I love the fact that he can be a bit down without being overwhelmingly angsty or suicidal (which is often the case with teenagers on fictionpress stories). I usually go for the "but the romance IS the plot" -stories but in this case I might be interested in hearing about other things than relationships, too. :) I'm waiting eagerly for more chapters!

Oh NO! The murderer isn't Chuck is it? It probably isn't but I still suspect him... I feel real sorry for Dev about his bloody family!
Hope you continue!

i really really like this. the way he says one thing but means another is hilarious and has so many opportunities. i really hope you update soon and often!

I sure did! I wish there would be a next chapter soon, but i guess all good things come with time.
I still can't figure out who Dev is going to fall for, seems to be dectective M, but i wish it could be Charless:P

I think his mouth has some grudge towards him, hahahahahahahah this story is amazing

This story is amazing, i fu*bleeb* love the way you write it's so funny, not to much details. mE-really-likey!

i like how this story doesn't jump straight to the relationship.
I'm not too sure how i feel about the detective being the love interest.
i think that chuck is the killer b/c of the "getting laid w/o commitment" statement that was made before. and of course, b/c of how perfect he is.

ABird