|Reviews for Colorless|
| bonky jo 5/19/13 . chapter 4
Wow im hooked! i wanna read more about marcus x devyn ;-) im really liking marcus as a possible love interest... im also really curious how dev honestly admitted to everyone that he was gay.
...oh did i mention how i love love love chuck. such an awesome friend! not even phased by devs disorder or that he's gay. wish i had a friend like chuck :-D
i hope you start writing and updating this again 3
| P-Nutter 3/19/13 . chapter 4
Loving this so far, Dev is a really interesting character... I've read quite a few slash fictions, but this one seems really unique.
Cant wait for more! :D
| Lanaika 3/3/13 . chapter 4
I really like your writing! It is fluid and you just have to continue to see what's going to happen next. And I'm telling you, it is a pretty rare talent, even for a professional writer.
So I guess I just wanted to thank you for writing these conderful stories and I hope that you will continue this one, because I'd really like to know how Dev is going to be arrested again by that sexy detective
| Maria 1/22/13 . chapter 4
Oh and I started reading the rest of the reviews and...what if it is chuck O.o (A must continue!) even though I like him for saving Dev...buy still...
| Maria 1/22/13 . chapter 4
Omg you have continue this story! Oh and btw not to offend you or anything because this isnt criticisum but in the 4 stories I have read by you so far...it always involves rape...just saying, again, not criticisum just a comment.
| Sae Ayameko 12/4/12 . chapter 4
You need to update this. Seriously, it's really good. Is Chuck the killer? He kills a rabbit - symptom of Pyschopath, his looks, meaning he's able to blend in well to society - another thing Psychopaths can do, his sex with girls and their "no commitment" - just reminds me of the rape and killing of the girls from the case. Interesting. e.e In any case, I do like him anyways because he saves Devyn. Please update!
| Aurorazola 12/1/12 . chapter 4
Oh my God. This story is so funny, I can't help but chuckle aloud. At the same time, I can't help but feel bad for Devyn, and everything he's being put through because he can't tell the truth. I think this story could go some extremely interesting places, but it seems it hasn't been updated in forever. Why not? :P It's one of the few great ones I've read so far on here.
| xMunchy 11/18/12 . chapter 4
Ehhhhhh! 4 years since this was updated? No. Nooooooo! As a rule, I usually don't read incomplete works because of situations like this. The work might actually be good and I would have to suffer for it. But I got curious. SO CURIOUS. I read the compilation of ideas, and that interested me, and then I read the summary, and it baited me in, and the story was just so good that I continued to read, and then... Nothing. NOTHING. -sob!- So sad!
But wow, already I find myself hating the people that I'm supposed to hate and loving the people I'm supposed to love. I mean, seriously, family! Can't you understand that he can't HELP it?! You are supposed to be supportive, not freaking hating him for something that he can't control! Gosh! And, ugh, JAMES. THAT BASTARD. WHAT A TARD. I would SO enjoy punching him if I ever saw someone like him in my school. I can't stand jerks... Unless I'm Devyn and he's Chuck, because Chuck is SO sweet to him! I love him! But why do I have the uneasy feeling that Chuck might be the serial killer? Because that is a cliche -the betrayal of someone you least expect it from? Because he is nice -maybe TOO nice? Or because he sleeps with a lot of girls -and therefore, knows a lot of them? I hope not. He's the hero of the story right now, the one we (the readers and Dev) can rely on. I would hate for him to turn.
Oh, and the other characters I love! Marcus the hot Native American detective who might be a smidgen too old for Dev (but I don't mind becase a good story I've just read was based on a young cop/high school boy relationship... Hint hint) and, most of all, the main character himself. Devyn! I feel so bad for him! And (in my mind) he is SO cute! Please continue this story! It is very nteresting and I would like to read it!
| J.M Llewellyn 11/7/12 . chapter 4
Love it! Poor Dev! Is Chuck the killer? Hope you continue soon, bye!
| R. Ficst 10/14/12 . chapter 4
Oh no! I just saw that this was last updated in '09! Is there Any chance you'll be coming back to finish this?
| R. Ficst 10/14/12 . chapter 1
| SkullszEyes 8/10/12 . chapter 4
lol. Hope you update soon! :D
I'm a pathological liar but im not OCD to lying but something else.
| SmileyfaceGurl 7/14/12 . chapter 1
I'm in love with this story. Our wedding is in 10 days, your invited!
| Bleed Into Night 6/6/12 . chapter 4
I LOVE this story. The plot? Fantastic! The characters? Unique! The writing? Up to snuff! Girl (or man, genders are nice), this story is one of the best I've read in a while. And I also love the twist of him being a compulsive liar, it gives me chills to read about a character that I've never had the chance to read before. One question; is 'Chuck' the serial killer?
| twibbit 3/17/12 . chapter 4
;) update soon !