 King-Cormorant 2009-08-10 . chapter 7Gah! This is amazing!
I must admit, I never thought I'd see a retelling of the 'Three Little Pigs' that involved gay sex. But I'm quite glad I did, this was a ridiculously fun read!
I loved the POV switch, especially because we got to see what the characters thought about each other. Realistic opinions I might add! Your characters didn't sing praise for each other... well, save for Timothy and his Peter obsession. But I thought it was rather nice that Steve thought Peter was a pompous prick.
Oh, and gosh was Conner brilliant! Here I was expecting huffing and puffing, and instead I got hot bondage sex! And Steve's denial was probably the best thing ever, by the way. Why don't all business interactions play out like this? ::scratches head::
The way you handled the 'game' between Conner and Peter was brilliant. I really got the feeling that they were two, intelligent men engaging in a battle of wits (as opposed to feeling that they were really two nincompoops pretending to be intelligent). Mm, and the way neither of them really lost was nice as well.
Ah... and the fact that poor Timothy would be paranoid enough to think Conner would immediately bring up his nearly successful swindling attempt with his new boyfriend made me giggle. A lot. But I guess I can see why... after all, a story like that would make some crazy good dinner-time conversation. "See, Timothy wouldn't sell me his house, so I had hot sex with him and tied him to his bed..." ::is shot::
Thanks for that, it was awesome! |
 Elkica 2009-05-16 . chapter 7I love this story. I don't know what is in ti that makes it so wow for me, but I remember after I read it, I took ten minutes and just thought about it, about Connor, how he even when he is such a greedy bastard has grow on me, how I felt sorry for Timothy, rooted for Peter and was snickering about Steve.
And the sex scenes were yummy, only maybe a little too short, I'm greedy where yummies are concerned. xD |