I love it.. I like the way you just let the words flow instead of limiting it using rules of poetry, but it's poetic nonetheless. I guess I already saw what was coming, having read the summary, but I enjoyed every word of this poem, the emotions are so real and I can identify with it so well! "How they use to be" seems cliched at first, but with all the palpable emotions flowing out of this piece, no phrase could have done a better job. Really well done!!
~fleur

aw. so sad.. makes me wanna cry.