oh my gosh

that's both funny and cute

and i love it :)

a very cute ending

and urgh at cheating boyfriends and sisters

loved it

izzie

This is a very adorable story and fun to read.

It is flowing quite nicely.

I enjoyed how the characters interact with each other, light bantering and doing the pretend game.

Anyway, it is nice and thank you for the story.

I am going to recommend this story to my sister. ;)

BC

Hahaha if he was real, I don't mind Reid calling me his munchkin either! (I am short anyways -.-" ) I liked this, the story kinda flowed pretty smoothly.. (:

nice one-shot.

Oh wow. This was really good. I loved it. It's such a cute romantic short story Great work!

I enjoyed this story... it was short and sweet, and the characters were interesting. It's a one-shot, but you started to develop their personalities anyway. Nice job.

I love it ) Nicely done.