 EarthChick 2009-05-23 . chapter 1Your review was flawless! My only concern was with the first sentence which starts: For my autopsy...
You might want to amend or alter that word to "character autopsy" or "character dissection" and still instill in readers the air of gruesomeness you are alluding to.
Aside from that, I could certainly relate to and wrap my emotions around the character analysis of Silver whose name first conjures visions of worth and wealth before our even knowing anything else about him.
I enjoy your use of words like obsequious and revulsion. They rise above the normal doldrums of everyday words and make for a more rounded, satisfying review.
Proud of you! Earthchick |