lol this is good ! funny indeed! the puzzle idea is so cute! lol.

I love the idea of this. The whole thing was hilarious. And cute and the kind of thing that you wish that would happen to you. People just aren't saints these days, huh? :D

"to(yester)day" was neat. A lot of the things you did with the wording were all really cool and made the poem more original than it already was.

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)