Your writing in this is really clever and pretty. You didn't have a tremendous amount of rhymes in this, but the poem still felt very poetic. :)

And I love the idea of this. I was smiling while I was reading it; it's cute and fun and reminds me of good memories.

-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)

i absolutly love it. and you can steal my hugs