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LittleViking 2009-08-30 . chapter 1
For me, this brings to mind a volkswagen driving along a road next to the sea getting assaulted by salty waves. But I can also see this interpretation being completely wrong. Either way, it's a magical poem.
in theory 2009-08-17 . chapter 1
The rhyme is perfect, I'm jealous.
hazyglow 2009-06-25 . chapter 1
To be quite honest, I don't really have an interpretation for your poem but it has such as wonderful flow to it that it doesn't matter. I do love your diction, particularly 'lugubriously', and I'm finding myself just reading it again and again.
Isca 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
This is an interesting little piece. The 'finned creatures with hair' made me think of mermaids. The imagery reminded me of a child playing with their toys.
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