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Isca 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
"My values are trashed." Wow. It appears that the speaker's moral foundation has been shaken for some reason.

"Torro." Nice diction.

"I understand; do you?" This is a perfect line when thinking about feuding lovers.
Louis Denair 2009-05-16 . chapter 1
It's genuine magic, the way you integrate more than one themes interlocking with each other, nearly embracing, knowing they are a whole that must be reunited. This structure reflects the subject matter- a torreador circling a bull, the corrupted registry(I think the speaker got into a messy feud with the lovable lady Windows), the interweaved and dominant theme of two lovers in feud, lovers which belong together but cannot settle their differences.
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