that was short... but i can't wait for the next chap!

Short chapter, but you bring out a bit of her personality. We see that she is extremely shy, which is slightly different to the way she acted when she was around the guys in the living room, but maybe she was more comfortable in that environment. Anyway, Update soon :)

LOL you should totally finish this story! it's hilarious and funny!

(girly squel)omg i love it thnx 4 updating i love ur story i love the guy austin i hope he dosnt tease her but i hope he staring not even noticing he sounds hot i love the girl friend of maddie n the pertective brother guy i forgot his name he sounds sweet but neway ur doing great love it g2g k? ttyl love ya n ur work pleaz update soon k? love the work ttyl love ya good luck n good health [; - VAMPIRE ROMANCE OBSESSER

So far, this is really cute. I'd like to read more, so update soon!!

I really like this story! Can't wait for the new chapter. I think that this girl is really brave. I don't think i would do that, well i might... lol

i kinda like this story:) update it every time!

OMG! i love this story its so cute im not a big fan of pistacheos but there pretty good i havent had them in a while i miss them i like twizzlers though hehe srry for n e missed spelled words for the future ur on my favorite story list now. ttyl :) i loved the story keep it up n pleaz update soon :) love ur work:)!

ok u got me hook coff it over hehe! omg! love it !

Its so cute, I cannot wait til the next chapter! You are doing so good with the story!

Good storyy...Can't wait 2 read more! =)

This is an interesting start. My one suggestion would be to not post it in bold font. It's a bit distracting, and hard to read.