|Reviews for The Cycle|
| Chandra Grace 5/23/09 . chapter 1
Wow. That was a very stating poem that flowed. Your rhyming worked. Good job?
| Luna Turner 5/16/09 . chapter 1
the last few lines were really impacting, and made the poem.
I really thought it was full of more anger than tragedy, but that's just me.
I feel deeply for both participants in this poem.
You conveyed the emotion well.