I really like it. I'm glad that she and Carter were able to get themselves back to each other.

I absolutely loved it! LOVED IT.
And see a pattern.
You have a thing for guys with names that start with the letter "C"?
And then there's girls with "M".
Hm... Coincidence? -shrugs-
BUT I LOVED IT! SO ADORABLE. As your stuff ALWAYS is.
I hope you find more inspirational stuff sooner so I can read more sooner!

This was great it has a lot of emotions and meaning, and i likes that a lot!

oh nice!! intresting this is different! havent read anything like it yett hahaha good! like it!! hahahaha

:) It was absolutely brilliant!! I loved it! Even more than the first chapter, which I thought was great!

The ideas are so cute. Maybe you should say "a series of one-shots" in the summary?

Keep writing! I want more! :P

Cute ideas! I have to admit, I'm a coffee lover. It kinda reminds me of this Korean drama I saw once called Coffee Prince, with the baristas and foam-images and all. I watch too many shows sometimes, lol. Anyway, I saw on your page that you have an AIM. I should find you sometime (once I figure out how)! My username's SugarCraziiness. Anyway, I'm off to read more oneshots.
--Leanne :3

Okay, so I finally got the chance to read this and it's so cute! I love it and Mariella and Caleb make such a cute couple! I can't stop gushing right now and I have to go send you an email. I have a lot to tell, since the last time we've talked! Anyways, I loved it and I can't wait for the next. Very glad that you made into a series of different one shots! By the way, I'm praying that none of the authors on here get plagiarized because a lot of my favorite authors are moving away to a different site!

~ Love2ReadnWrite

I liked this, it was really cute! Although I couldn't help but notice the fact that if coffee spilled on Mariee then how come it didn't burn? Surely its hot, right? Well anyways I liked it and i would like to see more of these mini stories!

Hey Kristy. I really liked this and I thought you did a great job.

However I do have some beta-reader like things to say to you. If that's okay. One thing is you shouldn't say BFF in a story. It really turns a lot of people off from your character (I'm not just saying it because I was turned off but I have read reviews and seen people's reactions to seeing the acronym in stories here). I also think you could describe things a little differently.

For example, instead of saying:

" Six-year-old Hannah smiled innocently at me, those big blue eyes glistening and her perfect, strawberry-blonde hair curled in ringlets with a matching-the-outfit ribbon settled on her shiny locks, making me almost forgive her and pull my little sister by eleven years into a bear hug."

You could say:

"Six-year-old Hannah smiled innocently at me, her big blue eyes glistening. Her strawberry-blonde hair was curled in ringlets and she wore a ribbon that matched her outfit. It almost made me forgive her and pull her into a bear hug."

I hope that you do not take this offensively. I only mean to help you (and right now I am trying to make my own beta-reading profile). If you have any questions etc. feel free to PM me! :-)

Aw! Cute!!

That was fantasmically sweet and awesome.
Caleb sounds hott. I think I just may steal him. ; ]

I really like stories like this. :) I'm glad that you started writing again. :)

nice. i love ur oneshots! they're all so cute!