Now that's what I call a prolific author! I'm impressed by both the quantity and quality. If you haven't already done so, I suggest that you try to get "Thurlow" published. There must be other readers who would enjoy it as much as I have. Good luck.

You retain your high level of storytelling. But I'm not sure that fairy tales -- even your delightfully cockeyed varity -- is a suitable place for sado/masochism. The internet offers all kinds of porn and people who go there know in advance what they'll be getting. Coming across it here might turn your readers off. You could at least warn them that very mature suggestive material awaits them.

The enchantment continues. You do well at telling independent stories strung together by a common plot line, while keeping track of several characters.

Very entertaining and amusing. "The son of stupider, I mean Jupiter." That's a great line. Silverbelle seems the kind of woman who could give a man a run for his money.

An interesting little tour around Thurlow and Asgard. But not as entertaining as your action/adventure yarns.

A well told tale with good action and dialog. I always wondered how Vulcan became lame. One mistake: "Ah, yes, my dear brother, you have out down yourself."

Very good. You've given Melissa a full, interesting personality. Just one mistake: "The shaky innkeeper done as he was told."

I'm glad Sir Basil finally got a woman, even under such strange circumstances. Now that he is a god, I'm curious to see how he will use his powers. I saw one mistake, in the 4th sentence: "...every living create..." for "creation" or "creature."

A very interesting development in the life of Sir Basil. The mother-son reunion is so charming that I didn't mind the lack of action that makes the other chapters entertaining.

Poor Sir Basil must be getting lonely :)

Virgil and Keala spent many happy hours in the beautiful garden, producing many sons and daughters.
-- with the ring?! Hehe :)

You have not, by chance, read a collection of fairytale type stories in a book called 'Rotten Apples' have you?

Love the moral at the end :)

Just as good as I remember it before. Hey, I don't care if he's a giant or not, never give a man a shot in the pills! lol. GOod story, pretty funny at points. I've always wanted to write a slapstick humor which at the same time is extremely hardcore. I'll check back here when I get more free time.

Very entertaining, with keen humor and insight. Just the sort of fresh new angles needed to pep up the fairy tale genre.

Another exciting adventure story. Well done. Just one thing bothered me. Sir Basil threw away his hatchet to fight Simon, but isn't it a magic hatchet that always returns to his hand?