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Green Eyed Angel 2009-07-27 . chapter 1
Where's the Aaron in my life, eh? Seriously. I want to order one or something. Can I?

This story... rocked. Made me want to cry and laugh and love the world at the same time. Why are all the sweetest guys always fictional?

I couldn't find anything wrong with the story. Why oh why are your stories always so perfect?

Anyway, it would make my day if you pm me. My author's name - as in my username here- is the same as the name I'm using. So you could pm me some "thank you" if you wanted and I'd probably be overjoyed.
naomi 2009-07-22 . chapter 1
amazing...made me cry
randomriles 2009-06-15 . chapter 1
Aw. Super cute. The guy is a bit mushy but actually, I think guys can be as emotional as girls on the inside, just that they don't show it on the outside. Sweet story. I liked it. :D I've never read a romance fic from a guy's point of view, so this is special. You should try more of this. It's a change from the cliche and I actually find it more romantic to view a situation from a guy's point of view, especially if he's sweet and understanding and cute. :D Red-heads rock!

Riley
Dealin' With It 2009-06-11 . chapter 1
That was soo sweet!! Great Job!! :)
Lily Llynn 2009-05-25 . chapter 1
I was a little annoyed by the constant repetition/emphasis on how he "would do anything to make her happy," etc. I'm sure there are other ways to phrase it or other ways to get the same point across and frankly it detracted from the overall story. I think you could've found other ways to express how much he loves her (and besides, the fact that he would do anything for her is kinda obvious, so it doesn't need to be stated 24/7).
Other than that, I thought that, even though this was really cliche and a little unrealistic, this was super cute and heartwarming, and I'm very glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:
guitar.fingers 2009-05-18 . chapter 1
wow, these kinds of stories are your best-sellers
blackandivorykeys (lazy ;D) 2009-05-18 . chapter 1
Haha, it's blackandivorykeys. You wanna reply to this review? PM me. I'll TRY responding... not sure if it'll work though.

So anyways, I really do love how your plot was developed. Simple, yes. But nonetheless, an enjoyable read.

Oh, reddish hair reminds me of Edward Cullen... hehe. I'm currently suffering withdrawal as fanfiction is being stupid with me.

Anyways, hope you keep writing this up. =D
mia5081 2009-05-18 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute.
Good job!
=)
Pinkamoo 2009-05-18 . chapter 1
Aw. He's such a pleaser. I probably wouldn't have fallen for him though. Too nice. I like boys that tease me, albeit playfully.
But boys like this are the best and deserve the best too :p
I don't understand how girls do that to themselves. I think I'd get a little annoyed if someone kept doing that to me. (the guy who keeps bailing on her)
But I liked the story! Much relief after draining macbeth essay!
x3life 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
aw this was so cute!!
i loved it =)
NoieD 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
Definitely enjoyed it and you did a good job with the guy's point of view. But the ending got fuzzy. I'd have liked some dialogue confirming their friendship as well. Perhaps a sequel?
toffeecakesxox. 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
ohmygod, i love Aaron. :D
he's so sweet!
that totally wasn't pansy-ish, i promise!
that was adorable and cute and i love him.
i want a guy like that.
i need a guy like that.

love.
love.
LOVE.

-toffeecakesxox.
Akumei 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
Aw, very cute story. I love one-shots and I love the best friend turning into a romantic relationship thingy ^^
Very good writing.
Smartass Joker 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
Aww, he's cute, I want a best dude friend like that
Peace,
Joker
AdiGal 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really adorable. Aaron seems so awfully nice! I personally don't think you made him too sappy.. you should write from a guy's perspective more often, it's... refreshing! Awesome story.
-AG (:
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