I laughed out loud at the end.
Your poem has a Haiku flair to it.
Hope to see more.

EarthChick

well, that's a little creepy, i'm not gonna lie.
but it was still funny at the same time:)

The detail in the beginning is very fierce, and I loved the girlish agony of that last line. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.