It's so beautiful... I love poetry and how it rthymes... It's so much fun to read out loud... Amazingly done!! :)

A lovely piece with great personification and word choices.

There are some lines in this piece that sound a little awkward, such as, "And crawled up on the bank, and tiredly there lay" (although I can appreciate how hard it can be to find a well suited rhyming line). However, the personification and the imagery, such as "corrugated tips", sound delightful and add life to the work.

this was beautiful. the personification was brilliant. the vocabulary was diverse and well used. i'm bad with reviews, but really, this was beautiful.

A great piece about the cycle of life, excellent rhyming and choice of vocab, again resembling old language =)

AW!

I want a little Autumn leaf!
It's so cute... and sweet.

xx