Aw! This seems sweet! I can imagine how it'll sound...but I'm probabaly wrong...

lol

Nice work with this so far.

Very nice song. A recording would be awesome since your delusional about your voice. Though a male voice for the right parts would bring it all together. Don't you need a guitar too?

Oh! This is great! And I would love a recording of this! :D

It would be interesting to hear this song, but I'm more interested in the story myself.

I like it.

-Harlow