"I don’t want to hear your twisted lies/I'm unfeeling to your emotion/Why don’t we just pretend that I'm dead?"
Wow. Really good!

"My mind...is one of those incomplete things." This opening line is very honest and introspective. I like that the speaker acknowledges her own naivety.

"Why don't we just pretend that I'm dead?" Oh, the pain and angst here is so powerful and intense.

"Don’t keep up that fake smile
I don’t want to hear your twisted lies
I'm unfeeling to your emotion
Why don’t we just pretend that I'm dead?"

Loved those lines! It makes me think of pain and sadness, but also a little but of optimistic things, like not pretending to be someone you're not. I don't know, that's what I thought, anyway.

Very cool poem!

"Don’t keep up that fake smile

I don’t want to hear your twisted lies

I'm unfeeling to your emotion"

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I really really like it:) Sorry I can't say more:(